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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Ilocar » Fri 14 Jun 2013, 00:49

Here's my conlang, Rhûnido:

buro kre, pilas kasó terát; cendis bat-tarakó pronunciation
tree around girl run-PAST and ball foot-strike-PAST
"the girl ran around a tree and kicked a ball"

(7 words, 15 syllables, agglutinating/synthetic)
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by nzk13 » Sun 16 Jun 2013, 04:43

Ido. Kinda agglutinative.

La puerino kuris cirkum l'arboro e pedofrapis la bulo.
[la pwɛˈrino ˌkuris ˈtsirkum larˈboro e ˌpedoˈfrapis la ˈbulo]
la puer-in-o kur-is cirkum l'-arbor-o e pedo-frap-is la bul-o
the child-FEM-NOUN run-PST around the-tree-NOUN and foot-hit-PST the ball-NOUN

9 words, 19 syllables.
Skribajon mean vi esas lektant, kar amiki.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Avjunza » Sun 16 Jun 2013, 06:29

Onure Image .Pa sae epene camus he zunru gae peramene ątą gu cantta.

DEF-SG-PROX girl run.PERF circle.LOC DEF-SG-MED tree.GEN and-then kick.PERF 3-ANM-ERG DEF-SG-DIST ball.

11 words, 25 syllables. That feels too long.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Click » Sun 16 Jun 2013, 11:03

:con: PN

Ayáː iskɔː wɛ́ mí ikʸɛ́=hi u lɛhi ɔstíː kʸaħ=i.
girl tree circle LOC run=PRF.PFV and 3SG-ERG ball kick=PRF.PFV
The girl ran around the tree and kicked the ball.

9 words, 16 syllables.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Creyeditor » Sun 16 Jun 2013, 12:13

Avjunza wrote:Onure Image .Pa sae epene camus he zunru gae peramene ątą gu cantta.

DEF-SG-PROX girl run.PERF circle.LOC DEF-SG-MED tree.GEN and-then kick.PERF 3-ANM-ERG DEF-SG-DIST ball.

11 words, 25 syllables. That feels too long.
Don't be ashamed. Spanish has 21 syllables and cedh's Doayâu has 27 syllables [:)]
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by prettydragoon » Sun 16 Jun 2013, 21:59

:con: Rireinutire

poya ñotono eno kimakive ita samena vekukive:
poya ñoto-no eno kima-ki-ve ita same-na veku-ki-ve
girl.NOM tree-GEN around run-PST-HSY and.then ball-PTV kick-PST-HSY
The girl ran around the tree and kicked the ball.

7 words, 20 syllables. Agglutinative.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Ithisa » Tue 25 Jun 2013, 21:10

Milyamd wrote: Nǚhái pǎole zhōuwéi de shù hé tī chū de qiú. 10 words, 13 syllables :zho: Chinese, heavily isolating
This does not mean what you want it to mean. It means the different "The girl ran the tree which was around (the speaker) and the ball which was kicked" which is ungrammatical since "run" is not transitive.

Anyway:

:con:Miyasalemmi
Ardikita tilarame ilımami sahtit' esti bórus fattita.
Ardi-kita tilara-me ilıma-mi saht-it-(a) esti bóru-s fatt-it-a
Female.person tree.GEN.ATTR perimeter.LOC run.PERF.INTRANS and ball-ACC kick.PERF.3rdSingO
Highly agglutinative. 21 syllables, 7 words.
Fluent: :chn: :eng:
Intermediate: :jpn:
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Foolster41 » Sun 30 Jun 2013, 08:30

Salthan:
Nənos-olos da-sani chi-nakəta tashnəns chi-dathə
ran-circle SUBJ-2f OBJ-tree kick obj-ball
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Lao Kou » Sun 30 Jun 2013, 08:45

Ithisa wrote:
Milyamd wrote: Nǚhái pǎole zhōuwéi de shù hé tī chū de qiú. 10 words, 13 syllables :zho: Chinese, heavily isolating
This does not mean what you want it to mean. It means the different "The girl ran the tree which was around (the speaker) and the ball which was kicked" which is ungrammatical since "run" is not transitive.
Rather, it does not mean what Google Translate wants it to mean. [xP]
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Ear of the Sphinx » Sun 30 Jun 2013, 09:52

Ithisa wrote:
Milyamd wrote: Nǚhái pǎole zhōuwéi de shù hé tī chū de qiú. 10 words, 13 syllables :zho: Chinese, heavily isolating
This does not mean what you want it to mean. It means the different "The girl ran the tree which was around (the speaker) and the ball which was kicked" which is ungrammatical since "run" is not transitive.
Please note that I copypasted it from another user.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Dormouse559 » Mon 01 Jul 2013, 21:26

:fra: French: moderately synthetic

La fille a couru autour de l'arbre et a donné un coup de pied à la boule.
/la fij a ku.ʁy o.tuʁ də l‿aʁbʁ e a dɔ.ne œ̃ ku də pje a la bul/
the.F.SG girl have.3SG run-PST_PTCP around of the.M.SG=tree and have.3SG give-PST_PTCP a strike of foot to the.F.SG ball

17 words, 20 syllables.

or

La fille courut autour de l'arbre et donna un coup de pied à la boule.
/la fij ku.ʁy o.tuʁ də l‿aʁbʁ e dɔ.na œ̃ ku də pje a la bul/
the.F.SG girl run-PST.3SG around of the.M.SG=tree and give-PST.3SG a strike of foot to the.F.SG ball

15 words, 18 syllables.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by DrGeoffStandish » Sun 07 Jul 2013, 19:53

Modern Jamtish. (Isolating/fusional.)

Storkję kúteð kring tré·eð og spærkeð boll·ę.
girl-DEF-NOM run-PST around tree-DEF-ACC and kick-PST ball-DEF-DAT
[²stɔʂː.æ ²kʰʉː.tə kʰɾɪŋː ¹tʰɾeː.ə/tʰɾeː ɔ ²spæʂ.kə ¹bɔlː.æ]

7 words and 12/11 syllables.

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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Click » Mon 08 Jul 2013, 12:27

:con: Proto-Littoran

Nu ciːku θes kik·ya, skaː yayin.
nu ciːku-ø θes kik=ya skaː yayi-n
PST girl-ABS run tree=around ‖ kick ball-ACC
The girl ran around the tree and kicked the ball.

Six words, nine syllables.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Click » Mon 05 Aug 2013, 10:42

:con: Vaski

Tsúr špıtátš ok·stáˀv ı špıvóˀr pávn.
[ˈtsʰur ʂpɪˈdɑtʂ ɔkˈstɑˀv ˈi ʂpɪˈʋoˀr ˈpʰɑʋn]
tsúr špı-tátš ok=stáˀv ı špı-óˀr pávn
girl 3S.PRF-run around=tree-OBL and 3S.PRF-kick ball
The girl ran around the tree and kicked the ball.

Six words with nine syllables. Heavily fusional.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by nzk13 » Mon 12 Aug 2013, 09:13

:con: Dimath 7 words, 13 syllables.
Spoiler:
CIRC = Circumessive (around, circling)
Nad that padus esax wu pabita kukabin.
[nad θat paˈdus ɛˈsaχ u paˈbita kukaˈbin]
nad that pa-dus es-ax wu pa-bita kukab-in
child female PST-run tree-CIRC and PST-kick ball-ACC
Skribajon mean vi esas lektant, kar amiki.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Click » Mon 12 Aug 2013, 21:42

:con: Kıeta

Ira rumı̨nın psudu, pubųgra su.
ıra rum-ı̨-nın’ psut·+u pu-·pųgra sue+u
girl 3SG3.PST-around-run tree-ACC 3SG3.PST-hit ball-ACC
The girl ran around the tree and kicked the ball.

Agglutinative/fusional. Five words with eleven syllables.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by zyx3166 » Wed 28 Aug 2013, 17:12

Roguel:
The girl ran around the tree and kicked the ball.
Sujo nonsup kitmekre korihekek.
girl tree-around run-3SG-CONJ ball-kick-3SG
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Chagen » Tue 15 Oct 2013, 20:51

:con: Heocg:


Ųðras bot keðnur gom lum wrottoyh zwaynd.
girl-NOM.SG around tree-GEN.SG run.PST and ball-ACC.SG kick.PST

7 words, 10 syllables. Mildly fusional/agglutinative.

Could also be:

Bot keðnur gomwagya ųðras wrottoyh zwaynd
around tree-GEN.SG run.PST-SIMULTANEOUS girl-NOM.SG ball-ACC.SG kick.PST
(Lit. "While running around the tree the girl kicked the ball")

6 words, 11 syllables.
Nūdenku waga honji ma naku honyasi ne ika-ika ichamase!
female-appearance=despite boy-voice=PAT hold boy-youth=TOP very be.cute-3PL
Honyasi zō honyasi ma naidasu.
boy-youth=AGT boy-youth=PAT love.romantically-3S
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Znex » Tue 15 Oct 2013, 21:00

Affixes hatred
Ho ho ho, you'll like this post:

:con: Proto-Oeng

kád pad a gìg ywk gkyu aēm eu gun
[kʼan̪4 ban̪4 a ŋiŋ2 ɞkʼ2 ŋkʼø̞2 ɛm3 ø3 ŋyn3]
kick run now girl EVD-6 someone around tree ball
The girl ran around the tree and kicked the ball.

9 words, 9 syllables, 9 morae.

Also, :grc: Ancient Greek

δραμοῦσα περὶ τὸ δένδρον ἡ κόρη σφαίρῃ ἔπαισεν.
[dra.mû.sa pe.ri to dén.dron hε̄ kó.rε̄ spaí.rε̄i é.pai.sen]
run.AOR.PART.NOM around DEF-N-ACC tree.ACC DEF-F-NOM girl.NOM ball.DAT AOR.play.3SG

8 words, 16 syllables.
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Re: Affixes hatred

Post by Sḿtuval » Sat 16 Nov 2013, 20:30

:con: Dvoekánitsa

Dvya gyu jol' dvyo čolo myayú ksyel dvya ksopsa mačú.
the.F girl around the.M tree run.3SG.PST and the.F ball strike.3SG.PST
[dvʲa gʲu dʒol: dvʲo tʃolo mʲaju ksʲel dvʲa ksopsa matʃu]

10 words, 14 syllables. Fusional.
Rev ṭe e mxe mèrzar konid.
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