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Annunciation

Post by Reyzadren » Mon 09 Oct 2017, 03:40

Let's have members here translate these 2 sentences. Source: Taken from the translation example on my conlang's wiki article.
EDIT: The instructions are made clearer.

:eng: English
Leonardo da Vinci (1452-1519) was incredibly gifted in many ways.
From sketches to paintings to scientific inventions (like the parachute), Leonardo was a man ahead of his time.


:con: griuskant (first 2 lines in the image below)
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lioun'ardou da vinci [1452 ; 1519] az ilz ijflagi iuz is tarc.
/liɔun'ardɔu da 'vintʃi az 'ilz 'idʒflagi iuz 'is 'tartʃ/
Leonardo da Vinci is very advanced.smart-A upon many perspective

vaezh venten un skauten un thustzhaeisten iki roictxaethen, zhas lioun'ardo az hangonspaezhe.
/veʒ 'vəntən un 'skautən un 'θustʒeistən iki 'rɔitʃtseθən, ʒas liɔun'ardɔu az 'haŋonspeʒə/
with draw-N-PASS and paint-N-PASS and new-make-V-PASS like fly.string-N-PASS the Leonardo is far-NN.think-N
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Re: Annunciation

Post by Lambuzhao » Tue 10 Oct 2017, 08:07

I'm sorry.
This is an annunciation of what, exactly?
:wat:
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Re: Annunciation

Post by Lao Kou » Tue 10 Oct 2017, 10:23

Lambuzhao wrote:I'm sorry. This is an annunciation of what, exactly? :wat:
A little thread crossover that was not made explicit.

Over here

you are directed in the first post to go here

the first block of which has the griuskant paragraph featured in this translation exercise with a picture of Verrocchio and Leonardo's painting, (The) Annunciation. My guess would be that after the first two sentences we are meant to translate about what a whiz-bang guy Leonardo was, the griuskant paragraph expounds somewhat on the painting in question.
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Re: Annunciation

Post by Lambuzhao » Tue 10 Oct 2017, 11:25

Ooh, :roll: [:$] thanks!
Nice!
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Re: Annunciation

Post by Reyzadren » Tue 10 Oct 2017, 15:09

lol no, I just want y'all to translate these 2 sentences into your own natlangs/conlangs, just like every other thread in this subforum. There is no cross-over with my conlang thread whatsoever as the first post here is merely my own translation/gloss.

:eng: English
Leonardo da Vinci (1452-1519) was incredibly gifted in many ways.
From sketches to paintings to scientific inventions (like the parachute), Leonardo was a man ahead of his time.

^tldr: Translate these 2 sentences.
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Re: Annunciation

Post by Iyionaku » Tue 10 Oct 2017, 16:57

Before this will become full meta, I'll begin.

:con: Yélian

Leonardo da Vinci yipamefísbit cu pillocan. At bortyîyaun iu alanimuman pès edisanyakasan (iuve sinicer), Leonardo yibet broya téviter yiutadanbratsbit.
[ləɔˈnaɾdɔ da ˈvintʃi ɕɨpɐməˈɸiːsbɨt‿u ˈpilokɐn | ɐ̆‿bɔɾtˈɕiːʃaʊ̯n ɪ̯ʉ ˈaːlɐnˌiːmʉmɐn pɛs əˈdiːsɐnˌʃakɐsɐn (ɪ̯ʉːʋə sɨˈniːkəd̟), ləɔˈnaɾdɔ ˈɕiːbə̆‿ˈbɾoːʃɐ ˈteːʋɨtəd̟ ɕɪ̯ʉtˌaːdɐɱˈbɾat͡sbɨt]
Leonardo da Vinci PST-totally-talented-COP.3SG.ANIM at field-many | from sketch-PL through picture-silent-PL to invention-scientific-PL (for_example parachute), Leonardo PST-COP.3SG.ANIM man REL.ANIM.MASC PST-too-early-bear-ADZ-COP.3SG.ANIM
Leonardo da Vinci was incredibly gifted in many ways.
From sketches to paintings to scientific inventions (like the parachute), Leonardo was a man ahead of his time.
Heaven and Earth, but I feel the color of the cake when you keep the Victoria.
I had a mantra on the moss and I had to go to bed.


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Re: Annunciation

Post by Lao Kou » Sat 14 Oct 2017, 06:35

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Léonardobauths da Vínchí (1452-1519) lü sek chnöirathsef ezgauthef kfíveshöth zhavdreu nöi.
Leonardo-NOM da Vinci (1452-1519) AUX.TRANSC INDEF.PL way-INSTR.PL many-INSTR.PL gifted-NOM extraordinary-AdADJ be
Leonardo da Vinci (1452-1519) was incredibly gifted in many ways.

Sük rhpuniksüd sko sík dvelíkelsíd sko zhö söik mnísferülízçírhetsöid sko (cha pévitansab felí), Léonardobauths lé sau íalörs höi chí öthlélsít rhautekezhalör nöi.
INDEF.PL sketch-POST.PL from INDEF.PL painting-POST.PL to and INDEF.PL science.invention-POST.PL to (DEF parachute-POST such.as), Leonardo-NOM AUX.PAST INDEF person-NOM PTCL DEF time-ACC surpass.PRES.PTPL-NOM be
From sketches to paintings to scientific inventions (like the parachute), Leonardo was a man ahead of his time.
道可道,非常道
名可名,非常名
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